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Parasitic
Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 6:36 pm Reply with quote
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To all Cult of Luukos members and those that role play with the Cult. The official history of the guild and Luukos' backstory have been updated. http://www.insanitycity.com/luukos/who_luukos_v2.htm

We have expanded on Luukos personality and made things more organized and spell checked my typos.

Have fun reading!

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Lucrette
Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 3:16 pm Reply with quote
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Fantastic and much, much better!

I like how Luukos is more a self-starter, more a being that ascends to godhood rather than an accidental freak of nature.

And I hate to criticize, but the final paragraph is written in present tense while the rest is all in standard past tense narrative.

I like the adjustments, it will make for more consistent and easier RP.
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Parasitic
Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 5:55 pm Reply with quote
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Lucrette wrote:
And I hate to criticize, but the final paragraph is written in present tense while the rest is all in standard past tense narrative.
Oops!

Lucrette wrote:

I like the adjustments, it will make for more consistent and easier RP.
That was the goal.

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Rheddjedet
Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 3:30 pm Reply with quote
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Reminded me of Berys from the Song in the Silence trilogy.... Embarassed

Luukos is more assertive in this version, which makes him a much more desireable leader/diety.

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Parasitic
Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 7:03 am Reply with quote
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Rheddjedet wrote:
Reminded me of Berys from the Song in the Silence trilogy.... Embarassed

Luukos is more assertive in this version, which makes him a much more desireable leader/diety.
You are right, which is why we did it. In the original he owed his undeath to Sylvanis like "most" undead. However in the authors' opinions that takes away from his power. So we changed it.

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Raethen
Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 8:41 pm Reply with quote
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There were just a couple minor errors I noticed, I doubt you care. The only thing that really seemed apparent was the whole ""A warning to all who oppose Luukos." thing in red, the word "Luukos" is on the second line but is also halfway onto the top one, cutting into the words above it. Or maybe it's just my comp. I dunno, wasn't even sure if it was on purpose.
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Deicide
Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 10:34 am Reply with quote
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just your comp.

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Gaboon
Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 6:55 pm Reply with quote
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I like it. I do have to agree though, the words are jumbled and no Dei, it is not this computer hahaha. Oh well just my thoughts. I hope in the near future the viper will return.

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Battlebones
Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 7:10 pm Reply with quote
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Gaboon wrote:
I like it. I do have to agree though, the words are jumbled and no Dei, it is not this computer hahaha. Oh well just my thoughts. I hope in the near future the viper will return.



It only does it if you use firefox, on IE it looks fine.

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Gaboon
Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 8:37 pm Reply with quote
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I use IE lol

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Deicide
Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 11:08 pm Reply with quote
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It's fine on my PC, both IE and Firefox.

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